I've entitled my poem, Secrets of the Heart.
by Gwendolyn M Plano Each week author Ronovan Hester invites interested readers to participate in a Haiku Prompt Challenge. This week he provided the words sing and peace. I'm a novice at this poetic form, but I'm intrigued enough to attempt this simple verse. If you have interest, please click on the link above, where you'll find detailed instructions. I've entitled my poem, Secrets of the Heart.
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Gwen Plano
1/22/2018 17:43:16
Oh goodness, LOL, vive la différence! Thank you so much, Davy, for the feedback and the laughter. :D
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D.L. Finn
1/22/2018 13:42:57
This is a perfect take on these words. Standing in the showers reflecting...so true. I lose a lot of time in shower in my thinking mode.
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Gwen Plano
1/22/2018 17:46:48
Tears can flow easily in showers and then comes the silence. Like you, I can lose a lot of time in the shower. Thank you so much, Denise. ♥
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1/23/2018 05:23:38
Yay, Nice Haiku, Gwen!
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Gwen Plano
1/23/2018 07:45:38
Thanks so much, Billy Ray! It's fun to try this poetic form. Have a great day!
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1/23/2018 07:47:58
So on point, Gwen. I read a paper one time that gave substantial evidence to the effect that the shower provides an ion exchange that promotes creative thinking. I think the same is true of secrets of the heart. The ion exchange creates pathways to peace. As you suggest tears are hidden as well. Nicely done.
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Gwen Plano
1/23/2018 08:36:06
Oh my goodness, now I have a real excuse for a long, hot shower. I didn't know about the ion exchange. Thank you so much, John. :)
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Gwen Plano
1/23/2018 18:38:35
Thanks so much, Jan. It's fun to attempt this poetic form. Thank you for the encouragement. ♥
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John Fioravanti
1/23/2018 09:52:20
A lovely thought, Gwen!
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Gwen Plano
1/23/2018 18:39:17
Thank you, John. Have a wonderful evening. :)
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Gwen Plano
1/23/2018 18:40:27
Thank you so much, Pranab. Your comment gives me much encouragement!
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