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Shoulder on Shoulder

11/19/2024

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Hello, blog friends. 

It seems the United States has survived the elections, even though strong sentiments remain. Looking back over the years, I've experienced 14 different presidents. 7 were Democrats and 7 were Republicans. I was inconsolable when John F. Kennedy was murdered. And a couple years later, when two people I greatly loved were also killed - Martin Luther King, Jr. and Robert F. Kennedy - I thought surely the world was coming to an end.

I’ve always supported the underdog, the discriminated, the homeless, and the ignored veterans. Politics hasn't done much for these populations, but good-willed citizens have (hurricane aid - a recent example). I mention this because ordinary people, like you and me, are the hope for our beautiful planet. My poem below reflects on that truth.

Cheryl is the host for today's Tanka Tuesday challenge. She invites us to write a Shadorma - a Spanish poetic form that consists of six lines with a syllable count of 3-5-3-3-7-5. This is my first attempt at this form. Maybe you'll give it a try too? 

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Have a wonderful week, dear friends. 
36 Comments
Eugi link
11/19/2024 07:01:53

Such a beautifully written and apt piece, Gwen.

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Gwen M. Plano
11/19/2024 09:00:05

Thank you so much, Eugi. If we all stretched out a hand, we might have a different world. 🌞

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Rall link
11/19/2024 07:52:02

I am so sorry about the catastrophe that has befallen you. Many of us around the globe are devastated for you. Americans are generally like you, good decent folk . Hope all this gets sorted eventually.

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Gwen M. Plano
11/19/2024 09:02:14

Thank you, Rall. I believe in people's natural goodness and am hopeful🌞

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Liz Gauffreau link
11/20/2024 05:42:23

A much-needed poem for these dark days.

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Gwen M. Plano
11/20/2024 08:03:18

Thank you, dear Liz. I'm hopeful family, friends, and neighbors will work together and forge a miracle. 🌞

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Priscilla Bettis link
11/20/2024 07:31:21

I've never tried a Shadorma, but since it has "shado(w)" in it's name, and since I'm sitting at my desk in front of the rising sun...

black and white
lines like prison garb
even like
jail house bars
the shadow of window blinds
freed by morning sun

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Gwen M. Plano
11/20/2024 08:00:07

Wow, amazing poem, Priscilla! "Freed by the morning sun" - love it! ❤️

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Priscilla Bettis link
11/20/2024 09:56:25

Thanks, Gwen.❤

Jan Sikes
11/20/2024 08:42:57

Beautifully spoken, Gwen. It's all up to us to shine light, love and kindness on everyone we meet. Hugs!

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Gwen M. Plano
11/20/2024 10:56:25

Thank you, Jan. I couldn't agree with you more. Hugs! 🌞

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Jacqui Murray link
11/20/2024 09:26:56

A lot of meaning in this poem. Maybe it helped some that in this election, RFK Jr got a degree of success.

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Gwen M. Plano
11/20/2024 10:59:03

Thank you, Jacqui. My daughter has worked with RFK and speaks highly of him. 🌞

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Timothy W. Dittmer Christine J. Dittmer link
11/20/2024 11:03:53

Wonderful, Gwen, so beautifully written and so insightful. Let's do the best we can to do good things for others.

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Gwen M. Plano
11/20/2024 11:08:41

Thank you, Tim. You've made my day. 🌞

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John Howell link
11/20/2024 15:17:08

It make take some time and I hope people continue to take on the responsibility to be kind to others.

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Gwen M. Plano
11/20/2024 16:28:09

Thank you, John. My hope echoes yours. 🌞

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Pat link
11/20/2024 16:14:47

Very hopeful, hope it comes to pass!
Pat

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Gwen M. Plano
11/20/2024 16:29:35

Thanks so much, Pat. I do too. 🌞

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willowdot21 link
11/21/2024 12:48:45

Gwen what a beautiful poem .... A ray of light in a sad world caught in a tissue of lies 💜💜💜

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Gwen M. Plano
11/22/2024 03:34:03

Thank you, Willow. Those rays of light lift our hearts. 🤗

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Karen INGALLS
11/22/2024 03:19:13

A beautiful poem for me to read as I "get back on my feet" after such a long journey of illness and the passing of my husband. Your writing is always inspirational.

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Gwen M. Plano
11/22/2024 03:32:09

Thank you, dear Karen. You've been resting in my heart. You are much loved. ❤️

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D.L. Finn
11/22/2024 09:30:01

Beautiful, Gwen. This divide us painful to me when I know what we are capable of. Xo

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Gwen M. Plano
11/22/2024 11:56:17

I'm like you, Denise. The divide is very painful. I just try to love and hopefully encourage the same. ❤️

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Jules link
11/22/2024 15:23:25

The common people will be the glue that holds our globe together. I remember taking part in "Hands Across America".

May we humans become smarter and more compassionate with each new day.

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Gwen M. Plano
11/23/2024 04:03:38

We commoners are the hope for our world. Thank you, Jules, for this insight. 🌞

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D. Wallace Peach link
11/22/2024 16:04:39

Such an encouraging poem, Gwen, and I love the hopeful heart and soul that it arises from. Thanks, as always, for your uplifting words. <3

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Gwen M. Plano
11/23/2024 04:06:01

Thank you, dear Diana. I'm so pleased you liked the poem. ❤️

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Yvette M Calleiro link
11/23/2024 07:15:37

Your poem is perfect, Gwen! I keep hoping our country can find it's way back to the middle where we focus on what unites us instead of what divides us.

Yvette M Calleiro :-)
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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Gwen M. Plano
11/23/2024 14:42:56

Yes, Yes, Yes! Thank you, Yvette. At the end of day, we are all more alike than different. ❤️

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Daniel Antion link
11/24/2024 04:04:28

Very well said, Gwen. We will always endure, with each others help.

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Gwen M. Plano
12/14/2024 07:48:34

Thanks so much, Dan. Shoulder to shoulder . . .

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Colleen link
11/25/2024 12:41:25

This is so true, Gwen. I feel so bad for all the people who will be hurt. xxx

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Gwen M. Plano
12/14/2024 07:49:40

Thank you, Colleen. Not a day passes that I'm not saddened by the sorrows in our world today. ❤️

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Melissa Lemay link
2/3/2025 19:53:16

Always good things to take chances on.

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