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Fragile Light

1/30/2025

32 Comments

 
Dear friends,

These last few days have been heartbreaking. A horrendous airplane collision - and people suffering from the impact of hurricanes, blizzards, and fires. Our collective sorrow has been overwhelming. My prayers go out to each person who carries the burden of hopelessness. I cry with you. 
This week, poet David Bogomolny offers a special prompt chosen by Jaideep Khanduja. It aptly fits the painful life challenges we share.
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​Interested writers are invited to participate by creating a poem with these directives:
  • Theme: contrast between light and darkness
  • Form: each line must begin with the phrase "In the shadow of..."
  • Length: exactly 7 lines
  • Tone: a narrative that transitions or oscillates between obscurity and clarity

This poetic form was a first for me. But with all that is happening in our beautiful world, the words came easily. 

​My poem ~ ~ ~
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I hope your week finds needed solace and deep peace. A big virtual hug to all... ❤️
32 Comments
D. Slayton Avery link
1/30/2025 11:36:17

I like how each line is connected. Well done.

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Gwen M. Plano
1/31/2025 13:44:52

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. ☺️

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Yvette M Calleiro link
1/30/2025 19:48:44

I love your poem, Gwen!

Yvette M Calleiro :-)
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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Gwen M. Plano
1/31/2025 13:45:18

Thanks so much, Yvette. ☺️

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john howell link
1/31/2025 06:18:28

A fabulous poem, Gwen. You led us to hope in a very intriguing way. Well done.

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Gwen M. Plano
1/31/2025 13:45:58

Thank you, John. I'm so happy you liked it. ☺️

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Timothy W. Dittmer link
1/31/2025 06:54:30

Wonderful poem, Gwen, a fine display of your heart.

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Gwen M. Plano
1/31/2025 13:46:31

Thank you, Tim. I'm humbled by your words. ☺️

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Jacqui Murray link
1/31/2025 09:45:10

We will survive.

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Gwen M. Plano
1/31/2025 13:47:08

Yes...oh yes, we will. Hugs, Jacqui. ☺️

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Liz Gauffreau link
1/31/2025 10:05:33

I'm so relieved that the poem ended with a fragile flicker of hope.

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Gwen M. Plano
1/31/2025 13:47:58

Hope sometimes hides, but it awaits discovery. Thank you, Liz. ☺️

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Priscilla Bettis link
1/31/2025 10:38:33

Oh Gwen, what a powerful poem. You stirred my emotions for humanity.

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Gwen M. Plano
1/31/2025 13:48:52

I'm so pleased you liked the poem, Priscilla. Thank you for the kind words. ☺️

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Jan Sikes
1/31/2025 15:57:45

Oh, so beautiful, Gwen. We have to keep that fragile light flickering! Hugs!

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Gwen M. Plano
2/1/2025 09:40:53

Thank you, Jan. I very much agree. ☺️

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Daniel Antion link
1/31/2025 16:55:31

I like this poem, very much, Gwen. I like the ending. I think it's important to retain hope.

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Gwen M. Plano
2/1/2025 09:41:37

Thank you so much, Dan. I very much agree with you. ☺️

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Thomas Wikman link
1/31/2025 21:40:15

Division is certainly becoming a problem. It was a poignant and heartfelt poem.The last line was amazing "In the shadow of hope, fragile light flickers"

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Gwen M. Plano
2/1/2025 09:43:29

Thank you, Thomas. The last time I remember us being this divided was the late 1960s/early 70s. Heartbreaking times.

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Freya Pickard link
2/1/2025 00:28:45

Love your poem, Gwen - you capture how fragile everything is right now...

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Gwen M. Plano
2/1/2025 09:44:12

Thank you, Freya. I'm pleased you liked the poem. All the best to you. ☺️

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Sarah David link
2/1/2025 08:45:13

Nicely done!

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Gwen M. Plano
2/1/2025 09:44:38

Thank you, Sarah. ☺️

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ben Alexander link
2/1/2025 11:16:09

Gwen, this feels intense and haunting to me. The progression from shadow to light is powerful, with each line deepening the tension.

Much love,
David

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Gwen M. Plano
2/3/2025 15:58:05

Thank you so much, David. I'm glad you found it powerful. ☺️

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murisopsis link
2/1/2025 11:51:13

The cyclical pattern is a delight to read! I agree that this year has not been a good one so far and the light of hope is fragile and flickering!

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Gwen M. Plano
2/3/2025 15:58:39

Thank you very much. ☺️

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Robbie Cheadle
2/3/2025 10:14:47

A lovely poem, Gwen. You used this form very well.

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Gwen M. Plano
2/3/2025 15:59:10

Thank you, Robbie. I'm so glad you liked it. ☺️

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ben Alexander link
2/5/2025 01:57:51

hi, Gwen 🥰

Just wanna let you know that this week's W3, hosted by li'l ol' me, is now live:

https://skepticskaddish.com/2025/02/05/w3-prompt-145-weave-written-weekly/

Enjoy❣️

Much love,
David

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Gwen M. Plano
2/6/2025 09:52:12

Thanks so much, David! ☺️

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