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A Japanese Haiku

9/30/2025

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Hello, blog friends...

Autumn is a nostalgic season for me, and perhaps it is for you as well. Chilly mornings and cool evenings evoke memories that travel through the decades.  

When I read Selma's poetry prompt for this week, to write a haiku poem, my memories took me to Japan, where I lived for five years. Haiku is a form of Japanese poetry. 

During my time in Japan, I taught English and practiced Zazen meditation. I was captivated by the natural beauty of the country and the kindness (and patience) of the people. I learned Japanese Tea Ceremony, flower arrangement, and other Zen-related arts, while studying the language. 

Zen is not a religion; rather, it is a way of life. It teaches one to be present, a state of mind that most of us struggle to maintain. This sense of presence is a way of seeing that frees us from judgment. I mention this because of a recent dream. 

In this dream, I saw 6 or 7 monks standing in front of me. They did not speak. They just stared at me with kindness. I immediately understood why. I have been very troubled by the conflicts erupting across the world. When I saw the monks, however, I felt a deep sense of calm and peace. And I knew that I needed to bring that peace into my interactions. 

I've never had a dream like this before. Usually, I don't even remember my dreams. But now, I'm trying to carry peace rather than worry and kindness rather than judgment. ❤️ 

My simple haiku is a response to the double rainbow that appeared over our backyard.

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Have a wonderful week! Let's all find ways to laugh--and play. 😊
30 Comments
John W. Howell link
10/1/2025 06:27:58

A lovely Haiku, Gwen. I am thinking your time in Japan was filled with miracles. The double rainbow is a miracle brought home.

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Gwen M. Plano
10/1/2025 09:15:20

Oh my, what a lovely interpretation, John. Thank you for sharing this.🌞

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Liz Gauffreau link
10/1/2025 07:28:19

Now that I know what Zen actually is, I would love to achieve that state of being.

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Gwen M. Plano
10/1/2025 09:19:47

I can't claim to stay in that Zen space, Liz, but I find that nature is a natural Zen-like experience and that is where I escape. Thanks so much. 🌞

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Timothy W. Dittmer link
10/1/2025 10:27:02

Your haiku is wonderful, Gwen, and the double rainbow is lovely. That you spent time in Japan must have been great. I've been a fan of Japan from boyhood, but only spent a short time there on the way back to the USA from Vietnam. The jet stopped in Okinawa for a while. I think seriously wounded soldiers were picked up once they were healed enough to go home.

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Gwen M. Plano
10/1/2025 13:04:42

Thank you, Tim. When my brother was on his way home from Vietnam, his sub docked at the Yokosuka naval base, which wasn't far from Kamakura, where I lived. We spent a couple days together. There were a lot of service men in Japan towards the end of the war, and as you mentioned, many were wounded. 💙

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Priscilla Bettis link
10/1/2025 11:25:52

Beautiful haiku, Gwen. I think world events are nothing me, too, because I've been feeling compelled to up the kindness factor.

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Gwen M. Plano
10/1/2025 13:05:41

Thank you, Priscilla. "Kindness factor" -- I love that! Yep, it's the only way. 😊

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Dan Antion link
10/1/2025 12:06:51

We all seek shelter more often these days. That's beautiful, Gwen.

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Gwen M. Plano
10/1/2025 13:06:15

Thank you so much, Dan. 😊

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Annette Aben link
10/1/2025 12:54:35

appreciating the Zen of your existence

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Gwen M. Plano
10/1/2025 13:07:01

And me - yours. Hugs, dear Annette. 😊

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Marsha link
10/1/2025 16:35:56

Lovely words, both the history, the dream, and the poem. We need more people to find that sense of peace. You received a double dose - a double rainbow and a dream

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Gwen M. Plano
10/1/2025 19:23:25

Thank you, Marsha. 'A double dose' I love that thought! 😊

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Thomas Wikman link
10/1/2025 17:21:32

A beautiful poem. That is a great photo of you. It is quite interesting that you lived in Japan for five years and the things you did and learend. What an amazing experience.

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Gwen M. Plano
10/1/2025 19:25:29

Thank you, Thomas. It was an immersion experience, and I very much wanted to learn about the culture. 😊

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Selma
10/2/2025 00:42:18

In awe I am. This is just so lovely. Thanks dearly, Gwen. Hugs

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Gwen M. Plano
10/2/2025 04:59:52

Thank you so much, dear Selma. 🤗

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Jan Sikes
10/2/2025 11:05:26

What an incredible gift the dream was, Gwen. It is my belief that we are never alone on our journey here and angels come in all forms. Just beautiful. Thank you for sharing and the haiku is beautiful.

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Gwen M. Plano
10/2/2025 11:11:29

Thank you so much, Jan, for your share. We believe similarly. ❤️

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Colleen link
10/4/2025 17:01:04

Gwen, that is a fabulous haiku! Your dream is similar to one I had years ago. I was teaching myself about Theravada Buddhism. I dreamt of a monk who taught me how to set up my small altar for Buddha. I'm very worried about everything that is happening in our world. But this is the best message I've read in a long time: Walk forward in peace and courage and continue to tend your light. 💟

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Gwen M. Plano
10/5/2025 04:34:47

Thank you so much, Colleen. I knew we were sisters at heart. 😊

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Paul Cannon link
10/6/2025 07:52:00

Exalted indeed, both the content and the intention, i.e. the rainbow certainly exalts, but so does the unmentioned subject, and the haiku in turn is exalted. I hope that ramble makes sense?

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Gwen M. Plano
10/8/2025 04:47:14

Thank you, Paul, for the kind words. And, yes, your 'ramble' makes a lot of sense. 😊 I'm super happy you enjoyed the venture.

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D. Wallace Peach link
10/9/2025 09:58:24

What a beautiful dream, Gwen. I'm so glad you remembered it and found a way to deal with the turmoil across the world. Being kind and loving is "doing" something to make a positive difference. Your poem is a wonderful reflection of that experience.

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Gwen M. Plano
10/10/2025 03:34:16

Thank you, Diana. I often shed tears for our beautiful earth and its people. But, slowly, I'm learning to walk through the chaos, focused on peace. ❤️

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Freya Pickard link
10/13/2025 00:28:31

I love your reflective posts - always with something positive to work into my life

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Gwen M. Plano
10/17/2025 05:10:06

Thank you, dear Freya, very kind of you to say. ❤️

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Harmony Kent link
10/19/2025 07:13:33

Deeply beautiful and moving. Such wise words and wonderful expression, Gwen. Thanks for sharing this 💗💗

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Gwen M. Plano
10/19/2025 09:35:23

Thank you so much, dear Harmony. ❤️

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